“I am the one who gives the orders around here. Who are you to ask me?”
“Huh! No way. I make this house a home, how dare you talk like I am of no value?”
“All you do is sit at home all day and watch these stupid daily soaps. You are becoming more and more like them day by day. How dare you look at me like that. Lower your eyes woman and don’t make me lose my temper.”
“What if I do? There is nothing you can do that you haven’t done yet. Your threats won’t work against me. I know what to do!”
“Will you go to the police? Are you threatening your husband that you will file a case against me? Stupid woman, you can’t touch one hair on my body.”
“Dadaaa, mummaaa” came a tiny voice from behind the curtains, “what about me? Am I not important?”
The story for today is based on the letter I where Leo and I have chosen to write stories around the word I.
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Oh, the little voice 🙁
How conveniently we forget that tiny voice while ensuring that the ‘I’ wins !
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that baby’s plight is sad 🙁
Good luck with A to Z bhavya 🙂
It is often the kids who unnecessarily suffer 🙁
When a woman finds her voice -There is bound to be trouble!
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I enjoyed reading your F, G, H, I posts today! (I’d read the earlier ones a few days back.)
You bring out profound thoughts very effectively! I particularly liked ‘Pangs of Hunger’. I’ve read many stories like ‘The I’s’, but your treatment of the theme is the best: really strong, especially in a short story.
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I think we synced very well in I without even realizing it 😀
“Innocent Kid”
Sad one 🙁
Yes, in between the fights we often the little one and they have very curious minds that understand what’s going on faster than we think
when my parents picked a fight (not the serious types) I used to tell them aap dono ke dimaag to kharaab hai hi ab mera dimaag kharab mat karo 😀
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The little ones suffer more than we realize no in such situations?
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Children suffer the most in a failed marriage, touching tale.
So true…it’s the kids who are always caught in these fights.
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Too often while getting our own point across we forget the little ones who are frightened by the shouting and taking it all in.
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Breath-taking climax and the tiny, innocent voice serves as a lesson to the couple who fights. The climax touched my heart:)
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Ah the innocent voice…often forgotten in the battle of I’s. Well done Bhavya!
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=( Any man that talks with disrespect about his wife makes me want to break out a knuckle sandwich. You got my blood pumping.
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I read Leo’s and then now yours… both of you have written brilliantly!!! 🙂 Failed marriages and kid’s fate!! sad yet realistic take
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the path that leads to a happy life is the same path where we walk from I to You… How beautiful was that story…
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