Surprised at the ajar door, he sneaked in post ensuring that the lights were off and everyone was probably asleep,

tip-toeing inside the house not to make any noise,

the lights went on exposing his masked face and the gunny bag on his back

as the crowd hollered out

‘Surprise…. Happy Birthday…’!

Surprise indeed twas.

It’s 55 Fiction over at WriteTribe Festival of Words today.


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25 thoughts on “Surprise!

  1. I was looking for something different with masked face,gunny bag and tip-toeing but you gave a surprise twist.Well done!!

  2. Short Story….. But Really Nice..
    The Way you write.. its just ” So Nice! ” 🙂
    Keep It Up.. (Y)

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