Surprised at the ajar door, he sneaked in post ensuring that the lights were off and everyone was probably asleep,

tip-toeing inside the house not to make any noise,

the lights went on exposing his masked face and the gunny bag on his back

as the crowd hollered out

‘Surprise…. Happy Birthday…’!

Surprise indeed twas.

It’s 55 Fiction over at WriteTribe Festival of Words today.


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Author: Ishithaa

She's the one who grew up a bit too soon, the child in her refusing to grow up. She's the paradox you will love to unravel, yet the truth in her eyes continue to disturb the web of your thoughts.

25 Comments on “Surprise!

  1. I was looking for something different with masked face,gunny bag and tip-toeing but you gave a surprise twist.Well done!!

  2. Short Story….. But Really Nice..
    The Way you write.. its just ” So Nice! ” 🙂
    Keep It Up.. (Y)

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