Thud!!
Noisily, she fell down again.
In the darkness, he smiled.
“Next time you try that, I will sleep on the other bed. You sleep here all alone hugging that cold pillow.â€
Oh he was a prankster, who did this all the time, but she loved her little brother too much and indulged him always.
(This is in response to an amazing tutorial and a prompt by Vidya Sury on Write Tribe.)
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Very nice, indeed. Somehow I expected the one who fell with a thud to be the teddy bear. 🙂 Thank you!
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Well, he calls me his teddy. So in a way you’re right 😉
That’s nice and sweet! 🙂
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He he.. thank you 🙂
That’s a real life incident. I know that! Coz I was just pushed off the bed by my brother! We the paavam elder sisters!
Aww paavam you .. yeah paavam us.. 🙂
Is that you in that pic???
Yes yes! 😀
Sweet story but sometimes brothers can be such a pain!
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Ohh yes… That they can be. Thanks for reading 🙂
Nice and sweet.. 🙂
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Not so sweet when you’re the one who falls off 😛
Hehe.. athu correct.. 😉 😀
😛
Ah, my brother instilled my fear of balloons by pricking one in my ears!! Thanks, Bhavya!
Ouch!!! That might have hurt. These brothers are a headache, you can’t live with them, nor can you live without them!
dei, honestly he got away with that..
What a good natured sister you are..
I wish I was ur bro too, pushing your limits further 😀
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Yeah I’m sure either you or I would have gone bonkers then 😛 😀
Brother and sister Love ! .. childhood revisited 🙂
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Yeah 🙂
This is so sweet! And baby Bhavya is really cute!!:)
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Ha ha… Thanks Tarang 🙂
Loved it… later these pranksters turn into the caring ones
Yeah, that is the phase we are going through right now. 🙂
Sweet story!!
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Thanks Kathy 🙂
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Hahaha..I am loving this…
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Ha ha – the story changed huh! N so did the DP 😉
U r DP is so cute 🙂
by the way thuddd .. ouch lagi to nai 🙂
cute one on the prompt
That’s si cute 🙂 I love siblings picking at each other like that 🙂 so much fun!
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A very cute story, liked the picture too.
Awww… Such a cute one. Brother sister fights and pranks are the best. I witness them everyday here. 🙂
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awww that’s so sweet ♥ you know just before the last line i thought it was a mother and her baby 🙂 :)… same emotions 🙂
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Sibling love without pranks is almost like missing the most important element of life 🙂
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Awesomely written on love. life is a celebration:)
Aww…so very sweet actually! 🙂
Ha ha…I can totally relate to what you habe said…only I have both a brother n a sister 🙂 its quite a circus 🙂