She woke up in the dead of the night, startled at the ‘clink’ in the house that was empty but for her. In spite of the cold in the room, she felt thirsty. Reaching out to the jug of the water she was habitual of having in the bedroom, the lightness of it surprised her.
“Did I not fill it tonight? Hmm… maybe I forgotâ€
Pretending to ignore the creak of 7th step on the flight of the staircase and making a mental note to get it fixed by a carpenter during the weekend, she proceeded towards the kitchen. The door was ajar and a light bulb flickered.
The fact that she never used to forget to lock the door and to fill her water jug never occurred to her. Unsuspecting anything she returned back to the bedroom and closed the door, latching it behind her.
With her thirst quenched and the satisfaction that all the doors were rechecked and confirmed to be locked, Laya tucked herself in. Sleep called out to her with open arms and she succumbed gladly, enjoying the rhythm of the raindrops against the windowpane that were lulling her to sleep.
“Clinkâ€
“Thudâ€
She swore she heard it again! Sitting upright, she noticed how humid it was, she was sweating and it felt almost like summer, but then it was the rainy season and the rain was beating hard on her window…
The window… where was it, why could she not see it? She tried her phone for to give her a ray of light, but it was dead. It was so dark her hand fumbled to find the light switch, but failed miserably.
It’s all in the timing!
Trying to get up, she knocks the water jug down, “Shit!†cursing herself for being so clumsy, she runs her hand along the walls of her own bedroom trying to find the door knob.
And she thought she knew me the back of her hand!
Whether it was because she was panicking, or because she could not find a way out of her room, there was a steady trickle of sweat going down her spine, making her shiver.
Got you!
As if a power cut was over, the lights switched on in her room, but they continued to flicker – as if, as if someone was playing with the switches.
Off. On. Off. On.
“Hell!â€Â Laya could not understand a thing that was happening to her. “First the noises, then the lights, and now, now why can’t I find the damned door! Why are all the walls looking so plain and… and where is the photo of Ryan and Me. “
 I hide, you seek.
Fear crept up on her; it was becoming increasingly difficult to remain calm. She tried screaming out loud, alas, no sound would come out of her throat. Nausea and giddiness overcame her and she fell on the floor with a loud thud.
******
Sitting up on the bed, Laya rubbed her eyes open and looked about her room. There it was, her favorite picture with Ryan, intact on the wall. Relieved that it was just a bad dream, she walked out of her room, towards the kitchen.
A light was flickering in there.
“Did I forget to switch it off again?â€
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OMG!! That’s spooky!!
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My first attempt at writing something eerie. Hope it worked…
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ooooooo!!!!!! jus remove that last line – “Surprise surprise!”
There is no line like that 😛 :O Are you too spooked?
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I keep feeling the same whenever my roommate goes home. No matter how many times I check the door lock latch and windows, I remain kinda restless till i sleep. I always feel as if I am hearing eerie noises. U know something? This often happens whenever I watch horror and crime serials before sleep. 😉 Any way, good post as always!
Your obsession to these thrillers is something out of this world. No wonder you’re spooked when left alone in the hostel 😀
Hi …Nice…it was spooky …Mission accomplished Bhavya!
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He he thank you 🙂
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Oh yes, I understand the feeling. You can feel totally paranoid when you think you have not turned everything off! Thanks for sharing!
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Thank you for reading 🙂
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Grrrrrrrrrrr………….. You scared meeee!!!
Had a good night’s sleep? 😉
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Very spooky! Well done. You captured the feelings perfectly.
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This is a first attempt.. I’m grateful for all the positive feedback 🙂
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U will give me Nightmares Bhavya!!!
If U ever were the author of my life, dare U make me the protagonist in a horror story *looks in fear and hides under the Invisibility Cloak*
If I was the author of your life, I’d write a fairy tale for you :*
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thank God you mentioned it was a dream 🙁 🙁 …
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He he 🙂
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omg! That was spooky!
brillaint ! 😀
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Waah thank you 🙂
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goose-bumpy!!! extremely engaging post…loved it thoroughly 🙂
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Aww thankee 😀
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Wonderful Bhavya…I love these kinda spooky tales…a few days ago I tried as well for the first time…Hope you liked it…I loved yours 🙂
BTW: Laya is just like me…I thought you were telling my story…I am as clumsy 🙂
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You and Laya will need to be combined to make the clumsiness that is me 😛
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The twist at the end was awesome 🙂
Thank you 🙂
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brillaint Post !
Hope it spooked you enough!
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Bhavya *clap clap* this one held me till the end. It was perfectly done in the write up and in the end. Really quite gripping 🙂
Richa
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Yippeee!! It was my first attempt you know 😀
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I love a good ghost story. Thanks for sharing and linking up.
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Thank you for such a wonderful prompt 🙂
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Utterly intriguing!! You got me on “Got you!”
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Glad I did 🙂
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